I like this one. I was wondering if you could clarify something for me. It sounds to me either that your kick might be clipping or you placed some sort of distortion on it. If it was distortion, just as a suggestion, I would recommend filtering the distortion with an EQ-cutting all frequencies below 6k and focus around bringing out the frequencies around 8k-11k as those are where you get a good click from the beater on a kick drum. I noticed that currently it's masking some other parts. It's very subtle, but I think it will make your mix sound even better!